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Helios said,
on March 2nd, 2006 at 8:09 pm
I was just leavin one of these things to get credit on for my homework
Helios said,
on March 10th, 2006 at 7:34 pm
Don’t you hate when people make you late for class? I hate the fact that people stand in the middle of the hall and do not care about anything but themselves. Those are the type of people that make late for my classes. Then once you do get to class you get yelled at because you are late. Nobody ever says anything to the kids that just stand there and take up space.
I always want to push them out of the way, which would solve my problem but with that comes some consequences. One our principle would not allow pushing or shoving in the hall. The person that you shove may think you want to start a fight. Or they will learn their lesson and stay out of the way.
The second thing you could do is ask them politely to move. They may move and be nice about it or they may stand their ground and ignore the request. This would cause me to get very mad and push them out of the way. Then it could start a fight which would be terrible thing. Some good that could come out of this though is that they may realize they’re in the way and stop what their doing.
Then if those two requests did not work I would simply run them over despite the consequences. This would probably make them stay out of the way for good because I would try to hurt them. I all I am want is to people to respect others and give them the curtsey we all deserve.
Ceres said,
on March 12th, 2006 at 7:04 pm
I like this satire because i feel the exact same way. I always just want to run those people over. The problem is definitely clear and real. I think this satire is creative. I wish i had thought of writing about it. I think the tone is perfect because it is exactly how i feel and that is how i always talk about that problem.
Helios said,
on March 13th, 2006 at 8:56 pm
I feel that this is a good a idea for a satire because it is a real problem. What I think I did wrong was i did it as a commentary instead of in a satire form. I actually now that i think about it still don’t understand how to fix it but I’am pretty sure I understand the problem.
Helios said,
on March 15th, 2006 at 11:28 pm
Don’t you hate when people make you late for class? I hate the fact that people stand in the middle of the hall and do not care about anything but themselves. Those are the type of people that make me late for my classes. Then once you do get to class you get yelled at because you are late. Nobody ever says anything to the kids that just stand there and take up space.
What we need to do is push them out of the way, which would solve my problem but with that comes some consequences. The principle would not allow pushing or shoving in the hall. The person that you shove may think you want to start a fight. Or they will learn their lesson and stay out of the way.
The second thing you could do is ask them politely to move. They may move and be nice about it or they may stand their ground and ignore the request. This would cause me to get very mad and push them out of the way. Then it could start a fight which would be terrible thing. Some good that could come out of this though is that they may realize they’re in the way and stop what their doing.
Then if those two requests did not work I would simply run them over despite the consequences. This would probably make them stay out of the way for good because I would try to hurt them. I all I am want is to people to respect others and give them the curtsey we all deserve.
If you have any ideas of how to fix it so it is not a commentary please comment me back.
Ceres said,
on March 19th, 2006 at 12:53 am
I think you should talk about how easy it is to get to class. There is always a steady flow of traffic. Students are dedicated to going to class. They are so excited to be at school. It’s not like walmart with people standing in the way all the time. Maybe you could do something like that. It might sound more like a satire if you try to show that people standing in the hallways isn’t a problem.
Helios said,
on March 21st, 2006 at 9:45 pm
Do you like trying to find your way through tough man sized mazes? Going into mazes and finding my way out is one of my favorite things to do because I love being lost. Like when I go to school and try to make it to class on time it feels like one big maze. While walking through the hall ways you will notice groups of kids just standing there talking and people walking everywhere. Once you make it to class you get in trouble for being late.
You could always view the maze as a race and sprint through it as fast as you can possibly run. It’s so much fun to do that because you get real red, hot, and sweaty. Then you sit down in class all out of breath with everybody sitting there looking at you like your idiot. Then my favorite part is when the principle yells at you for running in the halls.
Then if that don’t work you cheat to get through the maze. You could climb over the walls or through the bushes. So really you just run people over and jump them, which gives you a great thrill. Then the best times are when you knock them down and they get hurt. The people tell on you or you get into a fight with the person you ran into. I’m a fighter though and I love to get into fights.
You could also sit on someone’s shoulders so you can navigate them through the maze. The person under loves to carry people for hundreds feet on their back. Usually I pick that job because it is so easy. The person on top loves to hit his head off exit signs and clocks because it leaves a sweet bump on their head.
Mazes are so much fun to run through and jump over obstacles. This is the reason I like to come to school everyday because I love to feel like I’m trying to get through a never-ending maze and be late for class.
on March 2nd, 2006 at 8:09 pm
I was just leavin one of these things to get credit on for my homework
on March 10th, 2006 at 7:34 pm
Don’t you hate when people make you late for class? I hate the fact that people stand in the middle of the hall and do not care about anything but themselves. Those are the type of people that make late for my classes. Then once you do get to class you get yelled at because you are late. Nobody ever says anything to the kids that just stand there and take up space.
I always want to push them out of the way, which would solve my problem but with that comes some consequences. One our principle would not allow pushing or shoving in the hall. The person that you shove may think you want to start a fight. Or they will learn their lesson and stay out of the way.
The second thing you could do is ask them politely to move. They may move and be nice about it or they may stand their ground and ignore the request. This would cause me to get very mad and push them out of the way. Then it could start a fight which would be terrible thing. Some good that could come out of this though is that they may realize they’re in the way and stop what their doing.
Then if those two requests did not work I would simply run them over despite the consequences. This would probably make them stay out of the way for good because I would try to hurt them. I all I am want is to people to respect others and give them the curtsey we all deserve.
on March 12th, 2006 at 7:04 pm
I like this satire because i feel the exact same way. I always just want to run those people over. The problem is definitely clear and real. I think this satire is creative. I wish i had thought of writing about it. I think the tone is perfect because it is exactly how i feel and that is how i always talk about that problem.
on March 13th, 2006 at 8:56 pm
I feel that this is a good a idea for a satire because it is a real problem. What I think I did wrong was i did it as a commentary instead of in a satire form. I actually now that i think about it still don’t understand how to fix it but I’am pretty sure I understand the problem.
on March 15th, 2006 at 11:28 pm
Don’t you hate when people make you late for class? I hate the fact that people stand in the middle of the hall and do not care about anything but themselves. Those are the type of people that make me late for my classes. Then once you do get to class you get yelled at because you are late. Nobody ever says anything to the kids that just stand there and take up space.
What we need to do is push them out of the way, which would solve my problem but with that comes some consequences. The principle would not allow pushing or shoving in the hall. The person that you shove may think you want to start a fight. Or they will learn their lesson and stay out of the way.
The second thing you could do is ask them politely to move. They may move and be nice about it or they may stand their ground and ignore the request. This would cause me to get very mad and push them out of the way. Then it could start a fight which would be terrible thing. Some good that could come out of this though is that they may realize they’re in the way and stop what their doing.
Then if those two requests did not work I would simply run them over despite the consequences. This would probably make them stay out of the way for good because I would try to hurt them. I all I am want is to people to respect others and give them the curtsey we all deserve.
If you have any ideas of how to fix it so it is not a commentary please comment me back.
on March 19th, 2006 at 12:53 am
I think you should talk about how easy it is to get to class. There is always a steady flow of traffic. Students are dedicated to going to class. They are so excited to be at school. It’s not like walmart with people standing in the way all the time. Maybe you could do something like that. It might sound more like a satire if you try to show that people standing in the hallways isn’t a problem.
on March 21st, 2006 at 9:45 pm
Do you like trying to find your way through tough man sized mazes? Going into mazes and finding my way out is one of my favorite things to do because I love being lost. Like when I go to school and try to make it to class on time it feels like one big maze. While walking through the hall ways you will notice groups of kids just standing there talking and people walking everywhere. Once you make it to class you get in trouble for being late.
You could always view the maze as a race and sprint through it as fast as you can possibly run. It’s so much fun to do that because you get real red, hot, and sweaty. Then you sit down in class all out of breath with everybody sitting there looking at you like your idiot. Then my favorite part is when the principle yells at you for running in the halls.
Then if that don’t work you cheat to get through the maze. You could climb over the walls or through the bushes. So really you just run people over and jump them, which gives you a great thrill. Then the best times are when you knock them down and they get hurt. The people tell on you or you get into a fight with the person you ran into. I’m a fighter though and I love to get into fights.
You could also sit on someone’s shoulders so you can navigate them through the maze. The person under loves to carry people for hundreds feet on their back. Usually I pick that job because it is so easy. The person on top loves to hit his head off exit signs and clocks because it leaves a sweet bump on their head.
Mazes are so much fun to run through and jump over obstacles. This is the reason I like to come to school everyday because I love to feel like I’m trying to get through a never-ending maze and be late for class.